I jump around a lot when writing. When painting, cleaning, designing, doing most things, actually. I figure it has a
lot to do with my chaotic mind and tumultuous sleep schedule, and how brainstorming happens in my
head when it comes to creative things. I'll start in one place and skip around it,
leaving moats of negative space to be filled in later when I eventually
figure out what to do with it. Adapting this adventure is the same, family goings-on hasn't helped. But eventually I always get back on track and it always feels great when I do. So let's get back to this Dark Legacy.
Impractical Envoy
"Weary from a long day of riding in the cold, you [four to six] adventurers come to Duponde on a drizzly evening and stop at the Old Owl Inn. You're warming yourselves by the hearth, your damp boots off after a week of marching along the King's Road, heading far south to the city of Sarthel with correspondence from Lord Markelhay, the Lord Warden of Fallcrest."
— Not-quite-straight-outta-the-book
Important correspondence from Lord Markelhay, the Lord Warden of Fallcrest, in the hands of these adventurers, which they are taking from Fallcrest all the way to Sarthel — Sarthel, which isn't on any maps of the Nentir Vale because is far outside the boundaries of the Vale? But this adventure doesn't take place in Fallcrest or Sarthel or anywhere connected to them, it takes place in Duponde — Duponde, also not on any map of the Vale that I have seen...
When I picked up
Dark Legacy of Evard to adapt to 5e and incorporate into a larger campaign, I knew I would run into problems like this. The "Encounters" series of books for 4th Edition was designed to be a series of combat encounters (hence the name) that could be played by a group in a couple of hours once a day every week, with most of the time supposed to be spent on fighting monsters and villains while the story played out almost like cutscenes.
Dark Legacy of Evard was, from what I recall, notable for having choices in the adventure, but it still lacked a lot of narrative elements, a strong plot from start to finish, and a lot of moments for role-playing and improvisation since it wasn't intended for that kind of play.
While "converting" monsters from the book to 5e and coming up with more ideas that could lead to more role-playing and narrative-driven moments in the adventure or more interesting encounters, the question of what to do about the utterly pointless adventure hook was always pushed to the back of my mind. This week, amidst spending time with family and other things, I put aside the number crunching and put the adventure hook into focus.
The first thing I started with was maps. I'm hardly familiar with 4e's rules and its setting and I'm very aware of that and the fact that it would be a huge help to know a lot about the latter for this adventure. I roughly knew what the map of the Nentir Vale looked like and where a few adventure locations were, and I knew that there were fan-made maps with tons of cities and dungeons from many 4e adventures added to it, so I went digging around. I found a few different maps, but none, not a single map I saw mentioned Duponde or had anything along the road or river where I assumed the town is supposed to be. Oh well, I'll just stick a pin where I think it'll be. But another location I couldn't find anywhere in the Vale was Sarthel, though I was vaguely aware that the 4e setting extended beyond the borders of the Vale.
What a surprise to discover Nerath and
everything else in the world. For those that were unaware like me, Nerath is the greater continent that the region or "country" of Nentir Vale sits in. Figuring that out and being able to pinpoint where my piece was in relation to the whole world was a big step forward, and I immediately latched onto Nerath because of its scale and diversity; I like it a lot more for adventuring in than the Nentir Vale, I think because it's closer to the scale of the map of Middle-earth and it clearly has a wider array of environments. To the far to the northwestern-most corner of the map is the Sunless Citadel — I had a big "woah! Sunless Citadel is on this map!" moment, it was the first D&D adventure I read, that story is for another time — and a massive forest, the Dawnforge Mountains and Mithralfast on the eastern coast, multiple seas beyond, to the south are Vor Rukoth, Sarthel, the Trollhaunt Warrens, another mountain range, seas, forest, and The Golden Savannah; the Nentir Vale is a tiny area in the middle of everything.
Nerath and surrounding areas
(Then, I found maps of the entire world/plane with dozens of locations I had never heard of and decided to pretend all of that doesn't exist for now. It's just a bit too much, I have enough on my plate to dig into for a while.)
On the map of Nerath (above), Sarthel is tucked in a semicircle of mountains on its own short peninsula in the center, the Vale — and Fallcrest and all the other cities there — is a ways north of it, tucked between two great forests on the north and south sides, a mountain range on the east, and a river and what I expect are dangerous plains or a wasteland to the west.
Now I knew where the heck this "Sarthel" place was, and I figured the route from Fallcrest to there would be straightforward, so the next step for me was making a new map so I could start asking and answering more questions about the story that this adventure was trying to tell, or
could tell. I laid a small map of Nentir Vale over a large map of Nerath, penned in a quick, plausible route of the journey, and voila:
From Fallcrest to Sarthel
Well, then... Fine enough, having a map solves the problem of the party not knowing where they're supposed to be going if they ask that question, but it seems like quite the expedition. It seems silly to me to expect that any inexperienced people, even a group of four to six "1st-level" so-called "adventurers," would be willing to make such a far journey: just shy of 250 miles (~402 kilometers) using the scale on the Nentir Vale maps. That trip could take five to ten days of riding or hiking on dangerous roads and through uninhabited forests and plains where dangerous monsters are known to roam, and all for some lord the characters probably haven't met until the day the adventure started. This mission for Lord Markelhay is getting more and more unappealing.
What about a different mission? What would be a hook that feels more reasonable to me and that would be more meaningful to the players and more reasonable to the characters they're playing? I was at a loss for a while then figured my next big step would be to read about the starting point for the characters in this adventure.
Fallcrest
From what I understood before doing research, Fallcrest is the starting point for most adventuring parties in this setting. Big town or small city, temples and small guilds, a big river going through it, and it was razed at some point in the past, and that's about all I knew. The 4e
Dungeon Master's Guide had way more to work with than I was expecting and I couldn't help but twist the city a little... a little more than I needed to. Luckily, I have this little place to share all of my nonsense so I don't have to tuck it away into a folder and try to forget how much time I spent on it!
For the original town, look in the last chapter of the 4e DMG. Reading through it, the city didn't feel very old to me even though a
point was made that "hey, this place is old." Once I started making tiny
changes, the dam burst for me and it became more difficult to
pick one idea to run with over the others. I'm not sure what, something
about it grabbed me once I read a few paragraphs. It was really fun to
think about, even without all the tweaks I wanted to start an adventure
there right away.
Everything I did with it was either push it forward in time or tweak a character or location to fit other ideas, the numbers I use are basically just greater than the numbers in the book to reflect that time and the idea that the population and economy are experiencing some growth. At some point in the past, most of the things that are true in the book's descriptions might have been true, but there's more going on in and around the city. As for the town's distant history, I'll leave that up to the book and wikis and whatnot but with one addition: the "Creeping Shadow" (Shadowfell bleeding into this world) in the hills and forests are becoming a large threat to the city and travel on the roads.
"A small town built on the ruins of a larger city, Fallcrest is the crossroads of the Nentir Vale."
Outlaws are all over the place, some frequent town and cause trouble, there's a new gang in town that prowls the streets at night and is in conflict with the old gang made up of porters, and there are more and more monster attacks happening every week which might have something to do with unpleasant folk coming to town where they aren't welcome. The monsters are varied, but the attacks feel constant on some days, on days where they're lacking the gangs in town make up for it. It's been rough for a while, and the Lord Warden has been so busy that he appointed two Lord Marshals to split his burdens with. The Lord Marshals have a lot of new ideas, as do the townsfolk, and some of those ideas are being realized: the city wall is being finished, a new aqueduct on the river is under construction, more guards are being enlisted and trained, and the three lords can meet with more people as well as hire more "drifters" for adventuring work.
Population: 1,750; another 1,100 or so live in the countryside within a few miles of the town. The people of Fallcrest are mostly humans and halflings with a large number of dwarves. Few dragonborn and eladrin are permanent residents, but travelers of all races pass through or seek refuge.
Government: The human noble Faren Markelhay is the Lord Warden (hereditary lord) of the town. He has been in charge of the town's justice, defense, and laws for forty years, and he appoints a council to look after routine commerce and public projects. More recently, he appointed two Lord Marshals who oversee new military reformation and mercenary visitations formerly reserved for the Lord Warden himself, though Lord Faren still makes time now and again.
Defense: The Fallcrest Guard numbers seventy to eighty warriors who also serve as constables and pursuivants (officers of arms, heraldic authorities). Moonstone Keep is their barracks which has been repaired and added on to. The Lord Warden can call up to 350 militia at need, either Lord Marshal can call up to an additional 100 in total. The Lord Marshals are strongly urging Lord Markelhay to redirect resources to founding a new mages' guild in town.
Inns: The Silver Unicorn which is pricey but offers good service; the Nentir Inn sees a more interesting clientele; none of the temples openly offer night stays but do allow those who are homeless or poor to stay during bad weather as long as they are respectful or make another form of contribution (work).
Taverns: Nentir Inn; Blue Moon Alehouse; the Lucky Gnome Taphouse is seen as the cheapest and crudest drinking hole in Fallcrest.
Supplies: The Halfmoon Trading House; Sandercot Provisioners; Fallcrest Stables; Naerumar's Imports deals in valuable and magical trinkets; Teldorthan's Arms is the weapon and armor smith. The Market Green is bustling with local and traveling merchants in all but the worst weather.
Temples: Temple of Erathis, Moonsong Temple (Sehanine), House of the Sun (Pelor).
Most of the key locations were changed in some way and I added a few new ones. I don't think anyone needs me to put
everything I wrote here so I picked a few (give or take half a dozen, I got carried away) to show the idea, plus a few of the notable townsfolk. Note that a some spots were changed based on past adventures I played in other settings, the "Mosaic Market" is one that I love.
- Upper Quays. Boats proceeding down the Nentir River must stop here and offload their cargo, which is then portaged through town to the Lower Quays and loaded onto boats below the falls. Likewise, cargo heading in the other direction is carried up and loaded aboard boats bound upstream.
A surly dwarf pugilist named Barstomun Strongbeard runs the porters' guild, and he takes a cut of all wages paid to porters carrying cargo up or down the falls. Barstomun and his thugs have tried to extend their influence by intimidating merchants and nobles for years, forcing overland merchants to hire guild porters or barring nobles from reaching merchants in other parts of town. After one of Barstomun's hotheaded thugs openly threatened Lord Markelhay and started a riot by burning a boat full of their own supplies, most of Barstomun's most foolhardy followers were locked up and publicly removed from the guild. It is known that Barstomun still wants more reach, but he works much more quietly.
Barstomun Strongbeard
Medium humanoid (dwarf), unaligned
AC 14 (16 armored), HP 43, Bloodied 22, Speed 30 ft, INI +2
STR 18 (+4), DEX 13 (+1), CON 17 (+3), INT 11 (+0), WIS 15 (+2), CHA 8 (-1)
Saving Throws: CON +5 against poison effects.
Skills: Athletics +5, Perception +3.
Senses: Darkvision 20 ft.
Languages: Common, Dwarven.
Challenge Rating: 2 (450 XP).
Triggered Abilities
Pugilist.
Trigger: A Medium size or smaller enemy misses with a melee attack against Barstomun.
Effect: Barstomun immediately makes a throw attack.
Strongbeard Stance. If an effect would force Barstomun to move, he moves 5 ft less than the effect specifies. If an attack would knock Barstomun prone, he can immediately make a DC 11 Athletics check to avoid being knocked prone.
Abilities
Multiattack. Barstomun makes one unarmed strike attack. If the attack hits, he makes a second unarmed strike attack with advantage and can attempt to Grapple the target.
Unarmed Strike. Melee weapon attack, +5 to hit, reach 5 ft, one creature. 7 (1d4 + 5) bludgeoning damage.
Throw. Melee weapon attack, +5 to hit, reach 5 ft, one creature. Barstomun moves the target up to 5 ft and knocks them prone.
- The Town Walls. Fallcrest's Hightown is guarded on two sides by a wall (the river and the bluffs protect the other two sides). It consists of two parallel barriers of stone block with a few feet of fill between them, and stands about 20 ft tall. Every hundred yards or so, a small tower strengthens the wall. Two pairs of the castle's guards walk atop the walls at night, but unless danger is imminent, the towers are left locked and aren't manned. The gatehouses are permanently garrisoned by at least one guard.
- Moonstone Keep. The seat of Lord Warden Faren Markelhay, Moonstone Keep is an ancient castle compared to the currently standing buildings in Fallcrest. It sits atop a steep-sided hill overlooking the town and has an outer bailey that includes barracks which houses sixty or so guards. At any given time about twenty are off-duty. Other buildings in the courtyard include a stable, armory, chapel, smithy, and several storehouses.
Faren Markelhay is a balding human with a keen mind and a dry wit. He is past middle-aged but far from being called elderly — although Faren is reaching the end of his years sooner than his grandmother, Aranda Markelhay, she lived well past one hundred years and Faren is happy to have lived half that long. He is a busy man since he sees to local matters personally as often as his schedule allows. Adventurers calling on him or summoned to apply for specialized work will likely wait a long time for a short interview, and are equally likely to get an interview with him or a Lord Marshal. Despite how eager he is for news of other towns in the Vale and beyond and how distasteful turning away visitors is to him, he doesn't have the time or energy for everyone these days, and often he lacks energy because he spends more time than he should on such things according to his wife and advisors.
Lord Markelhay's wife is Lady Allande Markelhay. She is a cool and reserved woman ten years younger than her husband. A student of the arcane arts, she uses her abilities to advise her husband. They have three children; recently there was a funeral for their eldest child, Ernesto, who died while away in the south, living in the court of another ruler. They and many townsfolk are grateful their body was returned whole and with haste. At the same time, they can't hide that they suspect foul machines were at work.
- Temple of Strength. Before Fallcrest's fall, it supported several temples in the Hightown districts. After its fall, several were abadoned, including the House of the Sun, a temple dedicated to Pelor. Recently, the dwarf priest Zealot Grundelmar came from Hammerfast and reestablished the old temple and reconstructed two old shrines to Kord and Bahamut as their own small temples, giving it a new name when they were complete. Grundelmar is loud and opinionated, a real fire-breather who goes on and on about smiting evil wherever it might lurk.
Followers of Erathis are welcome and encouraged to visit the Temple of Pelor here and the neighboring Temple of Erathis.
- The Nentir Falls. Here the Nentir River descends nearly 200 feet in three striking shelflike drops. On the small island in the middle of the falls stands the statue of an ancient human hero named Vendar, holding up his hand as if to challenge enemies approaching from downriver. Local legend tells that Vendar slew a dragon whose lair was hidden in caverns beneath the falls. "If only they could be uncovered..."
A new project approved by the Lord Marshals — partially using fees collected by the porters' guild — is underway: a large gated aqueduct that can be used to more easily send cargo downriver and expansion to the dock in the Lower Quays.
- Temple of Erathis. This large, impressive stone temple is finished with Fallcrest's native marble. Its chapel is a large rotunda with a 30-foot-tall dome. The temple of Erathis is the largest temple in town. The place also includes shrines to Ioun and Moradin.
High Priest Dirina Mornbrow oversees three lesser priests and several acolytes — townsfolk who spend part of their day tending the temple. Dirina is an elderly woman who is convinced of the superiority of Erathis's dogma, and disappointed that more people in Fallcrest don't pay proper reverence to "our city's patron." She is familiar with several divination and restoration rituals and can aid adventurers in need of ritual magic in exchange for an appropriate gift to Erathis. She has limited access to the following ritual scrolls: cure disease (3), dispel magic (1), identify (1), lesser restoration (2), sanctuary (2, lasts 10 minutes), shield of faith (3). She has a collection of scrolls of raise dead and resurrection which she keeps locked in her chamber, but she fears she cannot channel the powers within the scrolls without dying and wants them safely moved to Moonsong Temple.
- Moonsong Temple. The third of Fallcrest's standing temples is devoted to Sehanine. It also includes small shrines to Corellon, Melora, and Avandra. The Markelhays regard Sehanine as their patron, and over the years they have given generously to the temple. It occupies a commanding position atop the bluffs, and its white minarets can be seen from any corner of Lowtown.
The head of the temple is High Priest Ardyn Starlight, an elf as compassionate as his father, Ressilmae Starlight, who was High Priest from the time he retired from adventuring to the day he died. Ardyn was taught by his father to teach and lead and now tutors local children in place of his father; the temple takes in all children, wealthy and poor, and has a substantial number of adults who attend lessons on reading and writing during weekends. Ardyn has access to the following ritual scrolls: greater restoration (1), lesser restoration (2), purify food and drink (2), raise dead (1).
- Naerumar's Imports. Considered the finest of Fallcrest's retail establishments, Naerumar's deals in gemstones, jewelry, art, and magical trinkets. The owner is Orest Naerumar, a tiefling who displays impeccable manners and discretion. Orest corresponds with relatives and colleagues in several towns and cities outside the Nentir Vale; given a few weeks, he can order in low-power magic items or other items of unusual purpose and value. Similarly, Orest purchases interesting items such as these, since other dealers in distant towns or cities are often looking for them.
Orest doens't ask questions about where folks in his store found the goods they're selling to him, but he is not a fence — if he knows that something was obtained illegally, he declines to purchase it. He knows the local thieves' cant used by the bandits in the area known as the Ravens, learned after several encounters with the group's leaders over the years. One member they knew well was an off-and-on partner until they died of infection last winter, and the Ravens, despite their history with Orest, helped Orest lay them to rest in the Moon Hills.
The halflings of the Swiftwater clan normally work with Orest to transport special orders. However, he sometimes makes other arrangements for items that seem especially valuable or dangerous. If a party of adventurers are looking for something to do, they might have luck finding a notice in town for work as carriers or guards for Orest's exceptionally valuable goods to be taken to another town.
Orest Naerumar
Medium humanoid (tiefling), neutral good
AC 15, HP 53 (10d8 + 8), Bloodied 26, Speed 30 ft, INI +5
STR 12 (+1), DEX 16 (+3), CON 12 (+1), INT 15 (+2), WIS 13 (+1), CHA 13 (+1)
Saving Throws: DEX +8, INT +7.
Skills: Acrobatics +12, Investigation +11, Perception +9, Sleight of Hand +3, Stealth +8.
Damage Resistances: Fire.
Senses: Darkvision 60 ft, Passive Perception 18.
Languages: Common, Dwarven, Ravens' Cant; can partially read Abyssal (every other word).
Challenge Rating: 5 (1,800 XP).
Abilities
Assassinate. During his first turn, Orest has advantage on attack rolls against any creature that hasn't taken a turn. Any hit he scores against a Surprised creature is a Critical Hit.
Blood Frenzy. Orest has a advantage on melee attack rolls against Bloodied creatures.
Devil's Mask. When a creature Orest can see starts its turn within 20 ft, he can create the illusion that it looks like one of the creature's departed loved ones or bitter enemies. If the creature can see Orest, it must succeed on a DC 14 WIS saving throw or be Frightened until the end of its next turn. Additionally, magical darkness doesn't impede Orest's Darkvision. This ability is only active while Orest is wearing the Devil's Mask.
Spellcasting. Orest is an innate spellcaster. His spellcasting ability is INT (spell save DC 14, +2 to hit with spell attacks). He has following spells prepared, requiring no material components:
Cantrips (at will): message, produce flame, vicious mockery.
1st-lvl (2 slots): detect poison, detect magic, identify, illusory script.
2nd-lvl (1 slot): blindness/deafness, blur.
Actions
Multiattack. Orest makes two attacks, only one of which can be an augmented strike attack.
Augmented Strike (Recharge 5-6). Orest makes a melee weapon attack and deals an additional 10 (2d6 + 3) fire damage on a hit.
Dagger. Melee weapon attack, +6 to hit, reach 5 ft, one target. 9 (1d4 + 7) slashing damage.
Reactions
Hellish Parry. Orest adds 4 to his AC against one attack that would hit him. If it is a melee attack, he may deal 6 (2d10) fire damage to the attacker. To do so, Orest must see the attacker and be wielding Faerinaea.
Orest's Equipment
Clothes, Stylish. Cotton and leather garments befitting an experienced and cunning tiefling.
Devil's Mask. Requires attunement. A grotesque black mask with two pairs of short horns. It grants its wearer the Devil's Mask ability.
Faerinaea. +1 Dagger, Rare. Requires attunement, 1,250 gp, 1 lb, Finesse, Light, Thrown (range 10/30). +1 to hit (+3 in darkness), 4 (1d4 + 1) slashing damage. As a reaction, you can add 4 to your AC against one attack that would hit you if you can see the attacker. Proficiency with a dagger allows you to add your proficiency bonus to the attack roll for any attack you make with it.
A large single-edged dagger of exceptional construction designed to emphasize slashing and parrying. The blade and simple yet elegant crossguard are made of steel married with a tiny amount of unknown planar material, and the handle is a minimally-carved chimera fang. It can bite into other iron and steel blades without becoming scratched itself and rarely needs sharpened.
Reed Flute.
Ring of Feather Falling. Requires attunement, 700 gp. A silver ring with a tiny opaline shell inlay and intricate geometric patterns on the exterior and simplified patterns on the interior.
If the ring is dropped or falls for 60 ft while not being worn, it will shatter upon hitting any non-cushioned surface.
- Septarch's Tower. A lonely, tall, seven-sided spire of pale green stone stands out from everything else in town. Before the Bloodspear War, this was the seat of Fallcrest's mages' guild — a grand order of a dozen or so wizards and arcane scholars. Now-facing defensive enchantments prevented the raiders from sacking the tower, but the guild's members died fighting in the city or fled to safer lands.
The tower is currently the property of Nimozaran the Green, and elderly wizard who was once apprenticed to the last of the old guild mages. Nimozaran considers himself the "High Septarch of Fallcrest" and master of the mages' guild, whose membership includes only himself and a rather unpromising male halfling apprentice named Tobolar Quickfoot. Nimozaran expects any potential new members to pay a hefty initiation fee, and so far only one other arcanist who passed through Fallcrest has seen any reason to join; as far as the townsfolk are concerned, nobody has done anything other than scoff at Nimozaran and his shallow ideals. Nimozaran can teach the following rituals to guild members over the course of 1d8 days: alarm, comprehend language, and magic mouth. He knows of a scroll of awaken and plans to sell it for a large sum or trade it for an equal (or greater) scroll. However, there are many other scrolls and books unknown to Nimozaran in dusty corners of the tower, written by the old guild mages and their teachers and their teachers' teachers, including a very old (and very important) tome titled "Tiny Hut Theorem" by an unnamed author.
The topmost level of the tower is a room that includes a permanent teleportation circle. Characters using travels rituals can set this circle as a destination (and will certainly startle old Nimozaran if they do).
- The Mosaic Market. The majority of Fallcrest's folk live above the bluffs in Hightown and walk down to do business on the streets of Lowtown, which bustle with commerce. This wide square is an open, grassy meadow where Fallcrest's merchants and visiting traders do business in good weather. The town's children gather here for games of tag or kick-stones.
Last spring, a jolly wizard in yellow robes passed through town and seemed to turn the dirt paths into beautiful kaleidoscopic brick and pebble roads and gave the children there rare flower seeds to sow which he said were to sprout the following spring after a good rain. Older generations know it as The Market Green, younger generations know it by the name The Mosaic Market, a nickname started by a young girl who started a juice and potted plant stand in the summer with her father after the wizard's visit.
- Lucky Gnome Taphouse. The Lucky Gnome is widely regarded as the cheapest and coarsest of Fallcrest's drinking establishments. It caters to the porters and laborers who work the docks, and fistfights are a frequent occurrence.
The owner is an unsavory character known only as Kelson. Kelson runs the River Rats, a new street gang that plagues Lowton, from the back room of his tavern. Most of the members of this gang settled on joining the River Rats solely because they didn't dislike any other members as they do with other gangs.
Kelson the River Rat
Medium humanoid (human), neutral evil
AC 12 (15 with mage armor), HP 45 (10d8), Speed 30 ft
STR 11 (+1), DEX 14 (+2), CON 9 (-1), INT 17 (+3), WIS 10 (+0), CHA 7 (-2)
Saving Throws: DEX +5, INT +6.
Skills: Arcana +6, Deception +5, Persuasion -5, Religion +6, Sleight of Hand +5.
Damage Vulnerabilities: Poison from red fruit and vegetables.
Senses: Passive Perception 10.
Languages: Common; can read 30% of Abyssal script.
Challenge Rating: 4 (1,100 XP).
Abilities
Blackened Blood. When Kelson is hit by an attack, black blood sprays from the wounds. He deals 1 acid damage to the attacker, or 3 acid damage if the attack dealt slashing damage.
Spare the Selfish. If Kelson falls to 0 HP, he automatically becomes stable.
Spellcasting. Kelson is a 3rd-level spellcaster. His spellcasting ability is INT (spell save DC 14, +6 to hit with spell attacks). He has the following spells prepared and can only memorize spells if he has the Skeleton Grimoire:
Cantrips (at will): chill touch, mage hand, message, spare the dying.
1st level (4 slots): cure wounds, mage armor, witch bolt.
2nd level (2 slots): branding smite (fire damage), heat metal, suggestion.
Actions
Multiattack. Kelson makes two scimitar attacks or casts a spell and makes one scimitar attack at disadvantage.
Scimitar. Melee weapon attack, +5 to hit, reach 5 ft., one target. 5 (1d6 + 2) slashing damage.
Kelson's Equipment
Skeleton Grimoire. A large black tome with a skeletal hand embedded in the cover. It is resistant to acid.
The pages detail diabolic rituals and necromancy spells, prayers to the demon prince Orcus border each page. Half of the pages are blank with drops black ink spattered on one. The full page before the first blank chapter has instructions for viewing the full grimoire written in abstruse, long-winded abyssal; in short, black tanar'ri blood — or humanoid blood tainted through rituals — must be spilled on the pages to reveal more abyssal script and dark diagrams.
If someone attempts to commune with the object, there is a 95% chance they will summon a spectral image of its creator, and a 5% chance that they will commune with a vision of Orcus instead.
- Lower Quays. Keelboats and similar craft put in here to unload their cargo and portage it up to the other boats above the falls. As described above for the Upper Quays, Barstomun quietly defends his guild's monopoly on moving cargo around the falls. In addition to the porters' guild, the River Rats lurk around the Lower Quays looking for the chance to pilfer from warehouses or roll a drunk in a dark alleyway — something Barstomun objects to.
Boats belonging to a number of different travelers and locals tie up here, the most common of which are the keelboats of the Swiftwater Clan. They carry cargo all the way down to the Nentir's mouth, hundreds of miles downriver. They're more than willing to take passengers for a small fee. Irena Swiftwater, the clan's matriarch, is a sharp merchant who passes herself off as an absent minded reader of fortunes and maker of minor charms.
Shifting back the issues at hand, now I had a pile of tiny fragments of ideas to work with and more ways to connect Fallcrest and the characters starting there with Duponde and other story "breadcrumbs" I want to scatter around the world. I tried rolling with the idea presented in the original adventure hook, but I quickly gave up on trying to make it work for me, since if it doesn't work for me and was never intended (from what I could tell) to ever be meaningful to the players, then it's probably best to throw it out and do something else.
- Duponde Requires Aid. "With all the larger cities unwilling to send resources to Duponde after a series of raids along the road, the king of Fallcrest sends a small party and supplies to help them stabilize and recover..."
Bandits on the road and creatures from the Shadowfell are making travel more dangerous than it was a decade or century ago, and they threaten even Fallcrest. It's reasonable to me to think that smaller, un-walled or unguarded towns in the Vale and the farms away from large cities would have been overrun some years ago or would fall soon.
- King's Couriers. One or more characters will act as a courier or emissary for Faren Markelhay
but they will not be destined for Sarthel right away. Instead, they will
be destined for Duponde to meet with Lady Celice Arnaud. The letters they carry will have unimportant information about marriage plans and are meant to be tokens to show the Lady's guards and allow them an audience with her (or something of that nature).
- The Veiled League. "One of the party members, or the Lord Warden, is working with the Veiled League in Gloomwrought in the Shadowfell. Their stay in Duponde is intentional as the agent knows of the town's connection to Evard and the Shadowfell..."
If the party is sent to obtain important information, they may need to travel to Gloomwrought and meet with Veleris a'Lindesta.
This is a little more out there, but could be a cool way to set up for a diplomacy-driven campaign or just a neat hook for a couple of characters. For more information on Gloomwrought, I skimmed through the 4e book Shadowfell: Gloomwrought and Beyond, which has plenty to work with for adventures there, though most of the ideas seem best for higher level parties and not new characters.
- Deathsteel. "Undead are a growing blight to the Nentir Vale. The king and his advisors are finding as many ways to protect the people of Fallcrest as they can, one way to defend against the growing threat is with weapons of a particular form of iron found in the Gol Mountains near Gloomwrought."
Another idea using bits from Shadowfell. The characters will join one of two parties embarking on this mission: Using a (slightly suspect) route on an old map, they will travel southeast on the King's Road then search for a way to cross into the Shadowfell and make the rest of the journey from there. Is it too convenient that Nathaire and Remy are in Duponde at the same time? Or are those two volunteers on the mission instead of showing up at the Old Owl Inn and causing trouble right as the party gets there?
Additionally, once the ore is collected, any interested characters can then work with a smith in Duponde or Fallcrest to forge a weapon. Nimozaran the Green might help if he can find the "Tome of Forging Burstflame" (or a book of another oddball name) in the tower; a high ranking priest might help if they know turn undead, destroy undead, detect evil, or disruption and has the components, or knows the ritual form of the spell(s). If a great arcane or divine weapon that can sense and destroy undead or evil Shadowfell creatures is created, it may become a sentient weapon that would greatly help in the battles to come later in the campaign. Perhaps an evil cleric like Kelson the River Rat or even Nathaire could sabotage the event and cause a weapon that serves Orcus or Vecna or opposes their enemies to be created. Or, if the players aren't interested in this, the events would be playing out elsewhere in the world and new items would show up in Fallcrest and news of it would spread once they return from their own journey.
- All of the Above. The Lord Warden and Lord Marshals need to stay in touch with their struggling allies elsewhere in the world, the Lord Warden is working with someone in the Veiled League within Gloomwrought, and there is a party heading to the forest near Duponde by the King's Road in an attempt to find a location where they can mine ore for deathsteel weapons, and Duponde is in dire need of aid.
These hooks are interesting to me and will certainly give the players more to latch onto than the original hook. Along with everything in Fallcrest besides this Shadowfell and Duponde business, now, instead of the party "arriving on a rainy evening to the
Prancing Pony Old Owl" and becoming acquainted with one another (and workers and patrons) once they get there, I can have them start in Fallcrest as "0th-level" characters who have — as part of character creation — accomplished their own goals, overcome minor obstacles, or completed small tasks for the Lord Warden, and who will become 1st-level
adventurers by the time they take their first steps in the Dark Legacy adventure. The players can start directing their characters' stories right away if they want to, and I (or any DM) also have a lot more to use when storytelling and creating NPCs and major events in the Vale.
The Journey
After getting into a comfortable spot with the adventure hooks, my next step was to figure out travel. Should there be encounters on the road? I think getting into the Shadowfell is more important, so for the first leg of the party's journey it would be better if weather was the only big factor. Encounter tables will be present but will be made of loose combat encounters that can be "glossed over" as part of a montage, skill checks such as fixing a cart or getting food, and social encounters or small moments like passing a merchant and broken down cart or deciding which of two routes to continue on or where (or if) to make camp for the night. Dael Kingsmill has a great video on
Overland Travel, Matthew Colville has a great video on
Making Travel Interesting, a lot of what they do is what I would like to do in this adventure and any more Dark Sun adventures I play.
For the series of adventures I call campaigns, I also like to make
time more important (Matthew Colville has a video on that too, I believe). I think I get this from consuming so much of the Lord of the Rings and the 3.5 adventure
Red Hand of Doom which has a timeline and is a keystone for why I love that adventure so much, and when I read about old D&D campaigns like Blackmoor or new adventures like Waterdeep: Dragon Heist, I latch on tight to the ideas of the passage and importance of time and weather and all of that. For Dark Legacy, at least for the first week or so, events are "scheduled" to happen as planned unless the party does something about it, and the clock starts as soon as the characters are made. As the DM, other plot points can be turned into concrete, scheduled moments each week as prep for the next session or two.
On the road to Duponde, weather or other obstacles (encounters) will slow the group's pace unless they make good decisions and the dice are kind in the moment. If they arrive "early," they will arrive at the time described in the original adventure, gathering around the Old Owl Inn at the same time as a few other patrons in the book or earlier if the others are delayed, and having some leisurely time to talk or do business. If they arrive "late," they reach town late at night — or a whole day later than they anticipated — which urges the party to stay at the inn or, if they're on the road still, forsake a rest at dusk and push on towards the city where it's safer. They might walk into a mist-cloaked town and be plunged into the Shadowfell upon arrival where the "first chapter" has started without them.
I like that. I'm happy with that. As always, I hope something here was inspiring or fun or useful in some way. And thanks for reading.